It started out as such a nice, pleasant slave auction.
I'm going to use that sentence, or some derivative thereof, in a story someday.
Now you want to know where it came from, right?
My imagination? No. From the mouth of my 12 yr old son.
Actually, he said something similar and I can't remember his exact wording, but I wanted to tweak it anyway. I think it makes an interesting start to a story. I mean, who expects a slave auction to be nice or pleasant? Certainly not the slaves. Certainly not any of us with a shred of compassion for our fellow man. I love how those words contrast slave auction.
What brought this on? We were watching Voyage of the Dawn Treader (yeah, FINALLY), and Lucy had just been sold at auction. The man hung a crude "sold" sign around her neck and brought out her sniveling cousin, and about that time the cloaks came off, the good guys revealed themselves, and the fighting began. Watching the structure of the scene disintegrate, my son made his comment. Gotta love his wry sense of humor.
I was told once that I would receive inspiration from my children. This one came easy. He spoke. My brain lit up. I had to write it down. Yes, this is the same child with the twisted brain that I've talked about before. I've shared some of his writing on my other blog, the one strictly about my family. Here's a LINK if you haven't had a chance to check it out. :)
And here's a fun LINK to a giveaway my friend is doing on her blog. She's helping me in that final push to raise money to help another FRIEND with her cancer expenses.
Children are great for inspiration. I do love the contrast in that sentence and it would definitely catch the readers attention. I will check out your links too. :)
Love that movie. And I love the things kids say. That is an awesome opening line!
I love your kids. XD
Thanks, all. I love them to bits. And I really am going to use that line. :)
That is funny! Great line! I would definitely be hooked.
Absolutely fantastic blog!!! Glad I found it! Love it!!!
I LOVE that line. There is so much story in those few words. Can't wait to read the story that goes with it!
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